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【哪位牛人替我写篇英语作文,作文要求是这样的你高考后将会有很长的假期,你会如何利用这个假期呢。(最...哪位牛人替我写篇英语作文,作文要求是这样的你高考后将会有很长的假期,】
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哪位牛人替我写篇英语作文,作文要求是这样的你高考后将会有很长的假期,你会如何利用这个假期呢。(最...
哪位牛人替我写篇英语作文,作文要求是这样的你高考后将会有很长的假期,你会如何利用这个假期呢。(最好使用333结构即三个高级词汇三个复杂句分三段。120到150词)谢谢
李杏春回答:
Itwon'tbelongbeforetheentranceexamination,afterwhichwewillhavealongsummervacation.Asamatteroffact,Ihavebeenlookingforwardtoitforalongtime--atleast,Icanhaveagoodrestafterthebusypreparationfortheexam.
Ihavemanyplansformycomingvacation.atfirst,iwillhaveagoodsleepandrelaxmyselfthproughly.second,Iintendtotravelaroundourcountryandvisitsomeofmyrelativesinthesouthofchina.third,iwouldliketodosomevoluteerworkinmyneighbourhood,suchashelpingtheeldersdosomehousework,tellingsrotiesforthechildreninthekindgartenandsoon.
Ihopeiwillhaveajoyfulandfullholiday.
李文华回答:
同样的题目,但不同的写作方法,会带出不同的结果,下面两篇同样题目不同写法给你参考。
你的要求:”高级词汇三个复杂句分三段“都有在作文里。
1.作文述说的内容:高考结束后”你“善用了假期,并在假期中学习到很多东西。
(这篇主要描写一个人如何让善用了假期)
IalwayshopedIhadanexcitingandinterestingsummerholidayuntillastyear.Aftertheendofthehighschoolexam,myhopewassuccessfullyattainedafterI'vegonetomyfirsthikingexpedition.
ThereasonIwentonthehikingtripwasbecauseitisarequirementfortheDukeofEdinburghaward.Ididn'twanttoparticipateonthehikeatfirst,butwithpersuasionfrommybrother,Ifinallyagreedtotakethisvaluableopportunity.Iwentonthehikewithagroupofteenagerswhoeveryoneofushadnevermetbefore.Attheendofthetrip,webecamegreatfriends.
Afterthishikingexpedition,Ihavearrangedacoupleofbackpackingtripswithmyfriendsduringthelongsummerholiday.Hikingisdefinitelyworthgoingtobecauseitisnotonlyfunandinteresting,also,Icantestmyleadershipskills.WhenIheadbacktoschool,Iwillneverhavethetimetogoonhikesuntilthenextsummerholiday.
2.作文述说内容:教你如何善用假期的方法。
(如果你要写的是“自己”如何善用,可以把“we”换成"I"or"my“,再改动一些词。不知道你要教大家还是自己用,所以写成大众化比较保障。)
Aftertheendofthehighschoolexam,weshouldmakethebestuseoftheholidays.Hencewegetalargeamountofsparetimewhichshouldbeputtothebestkindofuse.
Weshouldknowtomakethebestuseofourholidays.Studentsshouldhelptheirparentsintheirdailywork.Theyshouldmakeuptheirdeficiencyintheirschoolsubjects.Theyshoulddosomeadvancestudy.Theyshouldorganizethevillagewelfaredrivesintheirrespectivevillageandsoon.Besidesstudentsshouldthinkwhatmoretheycandoforthebestuseoftheirschoolholidays.
Holidaysshouldnotbeallworkandnorest.maximumrestandinnocentpastimesarecertainlyallowed.Butfreefromtheroutineworkthestudentsshouldnotbeidleandwayward.Theycanreallydothemiracle,iftheyputtheirholidaystothebestpossibleuse.
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