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本人10.10号就要考了因为先前低估了写作所需要的准备工作现在有些措手不及了这几天看了张红岩的十天搞定托福作文昨天才开始写完整的文章
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第一篇（因为是第一次花了40分钟拼错的单词将近十处发的是拼写错误改过的评分的话按照拼错3个的评）
heissueofwhethercomputersorbookscontributemoremerittothelibraryiscomplexandcontroversialone.Ononehandsomeoneconsenttothepointthatbookstakemoreadvantagesontheotherhandtheviewthatcomputersoutweighthanbooksinmanywaysbesupportedbyothers.AftercarefullyconsideredIconcludedthatthelateronemakesmoresenseIwouldliketopresentevidencesfavoringmythoughts
Firstandforemostthesignificantfeaturesofcomputers–convenient-
andefficientcanbemanifestseen.AreyouevergotlostinaconfusionandhugelibraryDoyouhaveaexperiencethatthecountlessbooksexhaustedyourenergyandinterestbeforeyoufindandreadit?Thissituationisnotrareinalibrarywhichislackofcomputers.Asweknowthelibraryisopentoserveforstudents.Howevertheshortageofcomputeralwayskeepingtroublethem.Thussomeefficientandconvenientcomputersisindispensable
Thecomputer-neededsituationnotonlyhasterribleimpactonreadersbutalsoabarriertotheadministrationofthelibraryitself.
Icannotemphasizetheimportanceofcomputersinthelibraryadministrationtoomuchinnowadayssocietybackgroundanduniversitiesreality.Everythingmaintainthefunctionofalibraryrequirecomputers.forexamplerenewcomputerlinkedwiththeinternetcaneasilyhavethisworkdone.
Lastbutnotleastwiththedevelopmentofcomputertechnologythebookcanbeinputwillactuallyincreaseinanamazingrate.Morecomputersthelibraryhasmoreknowledgethelibraryhold.comparedtobooksthereisnodenyingthatcomputershaveamorebrightfuture
Givenfactorsdiscussionmentionedabovewhichsometimesintertwinetoformthewholeandthusbecomemorepersuasivewecansafelyarriveattheconclusionthatcomputersoutweighbooksinmostwaysandshouldbeconsideredfirst.
