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一篇英语作文,帮我挑一下错,好的多加分!求求各位了!在线等!Intoday’sworld,differentpeoplehavedifferentthoughtsandways.Andsomepeopleliketodoonlywhatalreadydowell.Otherprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks
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一篇英语作文,帮我挑一下错,好的多加分!求求各位了!在线等!

Intoday’sworld,differentpeoplehavedifferentthoughtsandways.Andsomepeopleliketodoonlywhatalreadydowell.Otherprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks.AndI’dbetteragreethelatterone.AndIcanstatemyreasonasfollows:

Tobeginwithwecanobtainexperienceatrisks.Forexampleyouhavenevertriedtodosomethingbefore,butwhenyoutryyourbesttodothisthings,andyouwillgainexperiencefromthisthings.Whatevertheresultis,itisveryvaluableexperience.ForexampleonDecember11,2010,IattendedSSATexamandIdidn’thaveanyconfident,becauseIcouldn’trememberenoughwords.Andalthoughthescoreisnothigher.ButwhatIneedisexperiencebutnothighscore.

Inaddition,whenyousucceedinchallengingyouwillgetgreatpleasureveryhappy.Andlotsofscienistandwriter’sfamousbytheirchallenging.Whichnotonlygivestheyeconomicreturns,andalsopeoplegivethemhighpraise.

Moreover,challengingcanchangeyourpersonailtyandforceyoutogrowth.Youcanimaginethatyoudon’thaveanychallengingandwhenyougrowyouwillfeelverytired.

SoIprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks.

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  Intoday’sworld,differentpeoplehavedifferentthoughtsandways.Somepeopleliketodoonlywhatisreadyforthemothersprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks.Forme,Iagreewiththelatterone...
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