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Intoday’sworld,differentpeoplehavedifferentthoughtsandways.Andsomepeopleliketodoonlywhatalreadydowell.Otherprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks.AndI’dbetteragreethelatterone.AndIcanstatemyreasonasfollows:
Tobeginwithwecanobtainexperienceatrisks.Forexampleyouhavenevertriedtodosomethingbefore,butwhenyoutryyourbesttodothisthings,andyouwillgainexperiencefromthisthings.Whatevertheresultis,itisveryvaluableexperience.ForexampleonDecember11,2010,IattendedSSATexamandIdidn’thaveanyconfident,becauseIcouldn’trememberenoughwords.Andalthoughthescoreisnothigher.ButwhatIneedisexperiencebutnothighscore.
Inaddition,whenyousucceedinchallengingyouwillgetgreatpleasureveryhappy.Andlotsofscienistandwriter’sfamousbytheirchallenging.Whichnotonlygivestheyeconomicreturns,andalsopeoplegivethemhighpraise.
Moreover,challengingcanchangeyourpersonailtyandforceyoutogrowth.Youcanimaginethatyoudon’thaveanychallengingandwhenyougrowyouwillfeelverytired.
SoIprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks.