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高考英语作文请评分题目:feelhomesick(以下为我写的)不算概括20分满分请评分要求:描述一次你想家的经历(1)时间,地点,起因(2)你想家带来的影响(3)你是如何解决想家问题的Wo
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高考英语作文请评分

题目:feelhomesick(以下为我写的)不算概括20分满分请评分

要求:描述一次你想家的经历

(1)时间,地点,起因

(2)你想家带来的影响

(3)你是如何解决想家问题的

Wordsfailtoconveymygratitudetomyfamily.Myfamilyistheharbourofmysoulandtheoasisofmyheart,whosafeguardedmewheneversomethingbadhappenedandemboldenedmewhenIwasdiscouraged.ItwasmyfamilymemberswholightenedmyheartandlenttheirhandstomewhenIwasdrownedinsetbacks.

Memoryhasneverfadedoutinmymind.TimeflashedbacktothedaywhenIfelthomesickatschoollastmonth.Iwashauntedbythedifficultyfrommystudyandlife,soIrefusedtoeatfoodandstartedtomissmyhome.Hence,Itelephonedtomyfamily.Withmyfamilymembersencouragingme,Isummonedupmyconfidenceandpositivelyconfrontedmypressure.

Frommyangle,myfamilyservestobethebeaconandcatalysttodissolvemyicyheart,whohasmesoarandembracetheglorioustomorrow.

字数120左右

聂志明回答:
  没看评分标准,但感觉这作文不错,尤其第一段用词能给人良好的第一印象,如无字数限制方面的考虑,我看至少给你18分。当然作文评分很主观的,完全因评委而异,
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