高考英语作文请评分
题目:feelhomesick(以下为我写的)不算概括20分满分请评分
要求:描述一次你想家的经历
(1)时间,地点,起因
(2)你想家带来的影响
(3)你是如何解决想家问题的
Wordsfailtoconveymygratitudetomyfamily.Myfamilyistheharbourofmysoulandtheoasisofmyheart,whosafeguardedmewheneversomethingbadhappenedandemboldenedmewhenIwasdiscouraged.ItwasmyfamilymemberswholightenedmyheartandlenttheirhandstomewhenIwasdrownedinsetbacks.
Memoryhasneverfadedoutinmymind.TimeflashedbacktothedaywhenIfelthomesickatschoollastmonth.Iwashauntedbythedifficultyfrommystudyandlife,soIrefusedtoeatfoodandstartedtomissmyhome.Hence,Itelephonedtomyfamily.Withmyfamilymembersencouragingme,Isummonedupmyconfidenceandpositivelyconfrontedmypressure.
Frommyangle,myfamilyservestobethebeaconandcatalysttodissolvemyicyheart,whohasmesoarandembracetheglorioustomorrow.
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