2009年浙江高考英语作文,求点评
5月1日,高二三班的学生志愿者liyue和zhanghua去阳光敬老院(SUNSHINENURSINGHONE)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等).假如你是学校英语报的记者,请按下列要求用英语写一则100~120词的新闻报道.
1.时间地点人物活动;2.老人们的反应3.简要评论
StudentVolunteerBroughtSunshinetotheElderly
Mayfirst,liyueandzhanghuawhocamefromtheclass2ofsecondyearinourschoolandtheyhavebeentotheSUNSHINENURSINGHOMEasthevolunteer.Atmorning,theytooksomefreshfruittotheoldandtheoldweregratified.LiandZhangdidsomehourseworkinthenursinghomeandmadetherecleanandcomfortable.Atthemoment,theoldhadeatenfruitwithsmile.After,theytalkedtotheoldandtheywereallhappy.
Asaschoolreport,Ihavedonesomeinterviewtotheoldandmostsaid:"theyaregoodboysandwepleasuretoseethemagain."SoIcanseethehappinessontheirface.
Ithinktheyareexmpleastheseniorschoolstudents.Theyknowwhattheoldneedandtheyknowhowtocarabouttheold.Ifwecantryourbestforthesociety,ourlifewouldbemoreharmonious.