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初三英语作文求修改最好改成初中水平SallyBrownisayoungwomanwhowantstobeaprofessionalsinger.Nowshevolunteerhertimetohelpothers.Asavolunteer,shesingsatalocalhospitaltocheerupsickpeopleandsometimessin
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初三英语作文求修改最好改成初中水平
SallyBrownisayoungwomanwhowantstobeaprofessionalsinger.Nowshevolunteerhertimetohelpothers.Asavolunteer,shesingsatalocalhospitaltocheerupsickpeopleandsometimessingsatschool.Shehadrunoutofmoneyforsinginglessonssoshehadtocomeupwithideasformakingmoney.Sheputupsignsaskingforsingingjobandalsocalledupparentsofferingsinginglessonsforchildren.Thestrategiesthatshecameupworkedoutfine.Nowshewillbeabletocontinueherlessons.
Shebelievesthatshewillbeabletobecomeaprofessionalsinger.
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hospital,schools用notonlybutalso倒装.runoutofmoney那句开头转折如however,unfortunately等还可以加一句orthevoluntaryhelphadtostop.makemoney的方法建议用first---inaddition或intheonehand,i...
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