帮助英文文章改错
英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100%,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.
这是一篇采访稿,内有20个错误(全部语法,不要费劲找单词拼写错误或标点符号错误,只能修改,不能添加或删除),为了方便,每段话我都加了号码,不过这是一整篇文章,你们说几号的哪里错了,应该改为什么,找不够20个没关系,能找几个找几个,集思广益没问题,
1.Interviewer:Howlongdidthejourneytakes?
2.MissLi:Aboutfifteenminutes.TherewasagoodbusservicewhereIlive.
3.Interviewer:Whatattractedyoutothepresentjob?
4.
MissLi:Iamfeelingthatajobinthesalesdepartmentwouldprovide
mewiththeexperienceIamneeding.Ialsoamthinkingthatyourfirm
iswellestablishandtheprospectsaregood.
5.Interviewer:CouldIknowsomethingaboutyoureducation?
6.
MissLi:IcompletemyO-levels(剑桥O水准,新加坡的中考)threeyearsagoandlast
yearIhavetakenthreeAlevels(剑桥A水准,新加坡的高考)inEconomics,Commerceand
History.
7.Interviewer:Andwhatdidyoudosincethen?
8.
MissLi:ForthepastIworkedasastenographerinasmallfirm.The
payisallrightbuttheworkisnotchallengingenoughandIfeelIam
notlearningverymuch.
9.Interviewer:Whatareyourpresentdutiesandresponisbilities?
10.
MissLi:Idoafewshorthand,typingandfiling.ButIhaveless
responsibilitiesthanmycolleagues.Iwouldbemuchmorebetterinmy
worksifIhadmoreduties.
11.Interviewer:Soyoufindtheworkalittledull?Haveyouspokentoyoursupervisoraboutthis?
12.MIssLi:Yes,wediscussedaboutthematteratourlastmeetingbuthesaidhecouldnotletmetodomorewokrunlessIcancarryitonefficiently.IfyouthinkIcantakewhatithastogetthisjob,Iampreparedtodoamorechallengingwork.