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【帮助英文文章改错英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100%,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.这是一篇采访稿,内有20个】
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帮助英文文章改错

英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100%,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.

这是一篇采访稿,内有20个错误(全部语法,不要费劲找单词拼写错误或标点符号错误,只能修改,不能添加或删除),为了方便,每段话我都加了号码,不过这是一整篇文章,你们说几号的哪里错了,应该改为什么,找不够20个没关系,能找几个找几个,集思广益没问题,

1.Interviewer:Howlongdidthejourneytakes?

2.MissLi:Aboutfifteenminutes.TherewasagoodbusservicewhereIlive.

3.Interviewer:Whatattractedyoutothepresentjob?

4.

MissLi:Iamfeelingthatajobinthesalesdepartmentwouldprovide

mewiththeexperienceIamneeding.Ialsoamthinkingthatyourfirm

iswellestablishandtheprospectsaregood.

5.Interviewer:CouldIknowsomethingaboutyoureducation?

6.

MissLi:IcompletemyO-levels(剑桥O水准,新加坡的中考)threeyearsagoandlast

yearIhavetakenthreeAlevels(剑桥A水准,新加坡的高考)inEconomics,Commerceand

History.

7.Interviewer:Andwhatdidyoudosincethen?

8.

MissLi:ForthepastIworkedasastenographerinasmallfirm.The

payisallrightbuttheworkisnotchallengingenoughandIfeelIam

notlearningverymuch.

9.Interviewer:Whatareyourpresentdutiesandresponisbilities?

10.

MissLi:Idoafewshorthand,typingandfiling.ButIhaveless

responsibilitiesthanmycolleagues.Iwouldbemuchmorebetterinmy

worksifIhadmoreduties.

11.Interviewer:Soyoufindtheworkalittledull?Haveyouspokentoyoursupervisoraboutthis?

12.MIssLi:Yes,wediscussedaboutthematteratourlastmeetingbuthesaidhecouldnotletmetodomorewokrunlessIcancarryitonefficiently.IfyouthinkIcantakewhatithastogetthisjob,Iampreparedtodoamorechallengingwork.

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  1howlongdidthejourney(take)2There(is)agoodbusservicewhereIlive.3what(attracts)youtothepresentjob4I(feelthatajobinthesalesdepartment(will)providemewiththeexperi...
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