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帮忙看看考研英语作文我想考研究生,写的作文也不知道错在那里所以请各位帮帮忙看看,分数能给的我一定给.Fromthepicture,wecanknowthatmoreandmorepeopleadandontheirparentinthemodernsociety.Thepic
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帮忙看看考研英语作文

我想考研究生,写的作文也不知道错在那里所以请各位帮帮忙看看,分数能给的我一定给.

Fromthepicture,wecanknowthatmoreandmorepeopleadandontheirparentinthemodernsociety.Thepictureinforeusthatallchildarereluctanttolookaftertheirfather.Thephenomenonisveryuncommon.

Therearereasonsexplaintheproblem.Ontheonehandmanymanthinktheoldmanisveryheavyburdentotheirfamily.Ontheotherhandsomepeoplefeelthatthesocialpressureareverybiginthework.Soisthatthemalwayignoreoldman.Thepicturetellusthatwenecesssivecorrecttreatourparent.

Inordertoimprovethesituation,weshouldfindseveralsolution.First,weowesomuchtoourparentsinthattheynotgaveuslifebutdonesomuchinbringusup.Second,wehavethedutytopaybacktheirlove.Therefore,thegrovenmentshouldencounterpeoplecareourselvesparent.

还有我是新手请各位不要笑话,尽量按我的思路给我正确的答案,当然又好的句子你们写我来我一定学习,

刘瀚回答:
  写得不错.我没有试图去改你的文章和风格,只是建议修改一些小问题,如下所列,仅供参考.parent=parentsinfore=informallchild=allchildrenreasonsexplain=reasonstoexplainmanyman=manymentheold...
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