请英文高手帮忙修改英文稿,特别是语法MynameisTaohengmei.IcomefromtianchangcityofAnhuiprovince.NowIliveatAntingtownofJiadingborough..Myageis27.Ihaveeightyearsofworkexperience,including3yearsforplanand|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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请英文高手帮忙修改英文稿,特别是语法MynameisTaohengmei.IcomefromtianchangcityofAnhuiprovince.NowIliveatAntingtownofJiadingborough..Myageis27.Ihaveeightyearsofworkexperience,including3yearsforplanand

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请英文高手帮忙修改英文稿,特别是语法

MynameisTaohengmei.IcomefromtianchangcityofAnhuiprovince.NowIliveatAntingtownofJiadingborough..Myageis27.Ihaveeightyearsofworkexperience,including3yearsforplanand5yearsforpurchasing.

FromSeptember1996toJuly1999,IstudiedatAnhuiHuainaneconomytechnologyschool.Imajorinelectromechanicalintegration.Thisisasecondarytechnicalschool.Aftergraduation,fromAugust1999toAugust2002,IworkedinYuanxinelectromechanicalunshan)company,thejobisaplanner.FromAugust2002toAugust2004,IworkedinGaofengindustry(kunshan)company,thejobisapurchaser.FromSeptember2004toSeptember2006,IworkedinShanghailiaisicmemotoricompany.Thejobisapurchaser.FromSeptember2006toFebruary2008,IworkedinShanghaiandersonGreenwoodCrosbyvalvescompany,thejobwasapurchasingengineer,andwastheprincipalofout-manufactureproject.

AlloftheworkincludedSupplierdevelopmentandbuy.

Last,IthinkIamaresponsibleperpon.

theprincipalofout-manufactureproject

我想表达的是：我是外协（外部协作）方面的负责人

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　　去掉括号里的,加上大写的. 　　MynameisTaohengmei.I(come)AMfromtianchangcityofAnhuiprovince.NowIliveatAntingtownofJiading(borough.).(Myageis27)I'M27YEARSOLD,(.Ihave)WITHeightyearsofworkINGexperience,including3years(for)OFplanNINGand5years(for)OFpurchasing. 　　FromSeptember1996toJuly1999,IstudiedatAnhuiHuainaneconomytechnologyschool(.I)majorINGinelectromechanicalintegration.Thisisasecondarytechnicalschool.Aftergraduation,fromAugust1999toAugust2002,IworkedinYuanxinelectromechanicalunshan)?company,(thejobis)ASaplanner(WHATPLANNER?).FromAugust2002toAugust2004,IworkedinGaofengindustry(kunshan)company,(thejobis)ASa(purchaser)BUYER.FromSeptember2004toSeptember2006,IworkedinShanghailiaisicmemotoricompany(.Thejobis)ASa(purchaser)BUYER.FromSeptember2006toFebruary2008,IworkedinShanghaiandersonGreenwoodCrosbyvalvescompany,(thejobwas)ASapurchasingengineer,andwasthe(principal)HEAD?ofout-manufacture(?WHAT'STHAT?YOUMEANOUTSOURCING?)project. 　　All(oftheworkincluded)ABOVEAREINTHEAREAOFPROCUREMENT(,WHICHINCLUDESSupplierdevelopmentandbuy.) 　　(Last)MOREOVER,I(think)BELIEVEIamaresponsible(perpon)PERSON. 　　外部协作负责人?负责什么项目?通常这个职位是叫co-ordinator.