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下面的英语短文有语法错误么“TheOldCat”Anoldwomanhadacat.Thecatwasveryold;shecould“TheOldCat”Anoldwomanhadacat.Thecatwasveryold;shecouldnotrunquickly,andshecouldnotbite,becauseshewastooold
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下面的英语短文有语法错误么“TheOldCat”Anoldwomanhadacat.Thecatwasveryold;shecould
“TheOldCat”Anoldwomanhadacat.Thecatwasveryold;shecouldnotrunquickly,andshecouldnotbite,becauseshewastooold.Onedaytheoldcatsawamouse;shejumpedandcaughtthemouse.Butshecouldnotbiteit;sothemousegotoutofhermouthandranaway,becausethecatcouldnotbiteit.Thentheoldwomanbecameveryangrybecausethecathadnotkilledthemouse.Shebegantohitthecat.Thecatsaid,"Donothityouroldservant.Ihaveworkedforyouformanyyears,andIwillworkforyoustill,butIamtooold.Donotbeunkindtotheold,butrememberwhatgoodworktheolddidwhentheywereyoung."
胡雪萍回答：
在保留作者原本水平的基础上作了整段改动.有些赘述的地方省略了重复的内容,有些语法有点小问题,如“thecathadnotkilledthemouse”,虽不能说错,但此处没必要用过去完成时,这种小故事语法简单点比较合适.因此改...
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