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【帮我看看英语作文吧!Nowadays,almostalltheseniorhighschoolstudentswanttoenteruniversities,whichhasbecomeatendencyinoursociety.Haveyouthoughtaboutthereason?AsfarasIconcerned,thereareatleastthreecausesasfollow.As】
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Nowadays,almostalltheseniorhighschoolstudentswanttoenteruniversities,whichhasbecomeatendencyinoursociety.Haveyouthoughtaboutthereason?AsfarasIconcerned,thereareatleastthreecausesasfollow.

Asweallknow,Chinaisdevelopingrapidlyinrecentyearsandthatwillcontinuefordecades.Whileoureconomyisgoingup,ourdiathesisalsoneedsstrengthen.Studyinginuniversitiescannotonlybroadenouroutlookbutalsostrengthenourknowledgesystem,whichisbeneficialforus.

Thenextisthatthecompetitioninoursocietybecomemuchsevererthanbefore.Itiscertainthatthehigherdegreeyou’vegot,themorechanceyoumayhavetoobtainajobinsomeglobalcompaniesaroundtheworld.Sowecanseethatenteringuniversityisamainworkneedingnow.

Thethirdreasonisthatenteringuniversitiestogethighereducationisnotareachlessdreamnow.PlentyofcollegeshaveappearedinChinaandsomenewuniversitieshasfoundedaroundus.Wehavenoreasonstorefusesuchgoodchance,havewe?

Asaconclusion,thetendencytoadvancementiscertain,whichleadseducation’sdevelopment.Itisforthismainreasonthatmoreandmorestudentswanttoenteruniversities.

桑楠回答:
  "Asaconclusion"不太好,可以说asaconsequence   另外你写得太长了,高考不需要写那么长的!
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