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雅思作文批改Inthefieldofcrimination,itisahighlydebatableissuethatwhetherthecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationshouldtakeintoconsideration.Somepeopleadvocatethatfixedpunishmentsforeachtypepfcrimear
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Inthefieldofcrimination,itisahighlydebatableissuethatwhetherthecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationshouldtakeintoconsideration.Somepeopleadvocatethatfixedpunishmentsforeachtypepfcrimearenecessarytoupholdjustice.Howeverinmyopinion,itisarbitrarytocriminatesomeonewithoutathoughtofthecriminalmotive.

Firstly,fixedpunishmentdohaveadeterringeffectonsociety.Ifthecriminalsknowtheywillbesubjecttoacertainpunishment,theywillreconsidercommittingthecrime.Thisdeterringeffecthelptobuildsocialstabilityandsafetythroughdeclinethrateofcrime.

Secondly,sincepunishmentswerefixed,thosecriminalswouldnotbeabletoconvincethecourtforunguilt.Thiswouldstopthecunningcrimialsfromescapetheirpunishments.

But,letusthinkitover.Canapersonkillinginself-defensecomparedtoaheartlessmuder?Canapersonsteallingtofeedhisstarvingchildrencomparedtoarobberwithdrugaddiction?Theanswersareobviouseventheydidthesamecrime.Thus,ifwedonottakethecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationintoaccount,thelawswillbenothingbutcold-hearted.

Inmyopinion,anintermediarypositionbetweenbothsolutionsistheperfectwaytoensurejusticeandequity.Wewouldnotletapersonwithgulitescapeandwouldnotpunishevenasingleinnocence.Sincetherestilllotsofspaceforthelawstodevelop,ourgovernmentshouldthinkmoreabouthumanrightsandgivethosewhocrimewithoutintentionachancetoturntoanewleaf.

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  Inthefieldof(crimination要改为criminology),itisahighlydebatableissuethatwhetherthecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivationshouldtakeintoconsideration.Somepeopleadvocatethatfixedpunishmentsforeachtypepf(of)crimearenecessarytoupholdjustice.Howeverinmyopinion,itisarbitrarytocriminatesomeonewithoutathoughtofthecriminalmotive.   Firstly,fixedpunishment(do改为does)haveadeterringeffectonsociety.Ifthecriminalsknowtheywillbesubjecttoacertainpunishment,theywillreconsidercommittingthecrime.Thisdeterringeffect(help要加s)tobuildsocialstabilityandsafetythroughdeclinetherateofcrime.   Secondly,sincepunishmentswerefixed,thosecriminalswouldnotbeabletoconvincethecourt(forunguilt改为ofinnocence).Thiswouldstopthecunningcriminalsfromescapetheirpunishments.   But,letusthinkitover.Canapersonkillinginself-defensecomparedtoaheartless(muder是murder)?Canaperson(steallingstealing一个l)tofeedhisstarvingchildrencomparedtoarobberwithdrugaddiction?Theanswersareobviouseventheydidthesamecrime.Thus,ifwedonottakethecircumstancesofanindividualcrimeandthemotivation(into是一个字into)account,thelawswillbenothingbutcold-hearted.   Inmyopinion,anintermediarypositionbetweenbothsolutionsistheperfectwaytoensurejusticeandequity.Wewouldnotletapersonwith(gulit是guilt)escapeandwouldnotpunishevenasingleinnocence.Sincetherestilllotsofspaceforthelawstodevelop,ourgovernmentshouldthinkmoreabouthumanrightsandgivethosewhocrimewithoutintentionachancetoturntoanewleaf.   全文基本上些没有大错,只是几个错字,已替你更正了,
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