问题标题：
【1.Wewillwithdrawtheofferifweshouldnotheartoyoubytheendofthisweek2.TheearliestshipmentisDecember,wehopethatitwillbeacceptablewithyou3.Wearepreparedtokeeptheofferopento25ththismonth4.Thebuyeragreesforafriend】
问题描述：
1.Wewillwithdrawtheofferifweshouldnotheartoyoubytheendofthisweek
2.TheearliestshipmentisDecember,wehopethatitwillbeacceptablewithyou
3.Wearepreparedtokeeptheofferopento25ththismonth
4.Thebuyeragreesforafriendlysettlementofthedispute
5.Wewouldliketodirectyourattentiontothequalityofthegoodswhichissuperiorfromthatofothermakers
6.Seeingthatourtoolsareenjoyingfastsales,wesuggestthatyoumusttakenecessarystepswithoutanydelay
7.WeagreethatyousendArtNo100tosubstituteofArtNo101underourorderNo123
8.Weassureyouthattheshipmentofmen'sshirtswillprovetillthesatisfactionofyourcustomers
9.Inthetime,wewouldaskyoutosendthereplacementtousassoonaspossible
10.Theyhavesoldforwardtheirwholestockoffrozenfish
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孙昊回答：
1hearto---hearfrom
2inDecember
3Weareprepared---Weprepared
4agreesfor--agreeswith
5makers--makers'
6去掉must
7去掉to
8去掉will
9Inthetime---bythetime
10soldforward--soldout
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