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高考英语作文求批改(30分)(04浙江卷)DearSteve,I’msopleasedtolearnthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningChinese.I’dliketorecommendthefollowingtwodictionaries.OnceIgotthebookstoreIhaveseensucha
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高考英语作文求批改(30分)(04浙江卷)

DearSteve,

I’msopleasedtolearnthatyouandyourclassmatesarelearningChinese.

I’dliketorecommendthefollowingtwodictionaries.

OnceIgotthebookstoreIhaveseensuchagreatdictionarynamedTheEnglish-ChineseChinese-EnglishDictionary(ECCED).Ithasincluded18000Englishwordsand20000Chinesewords.Muchtomysurprise,itonlytakesyoufiftytwoRMB.Manygreatexampleandthemannerofusingthewordshavebeencollected.Ofcourse,asforme,IpreferXinhuaDictionary(XD)more.ItmustbemoresuitableforthenewlearnerstostudyChinese.

Itmaybeagreathelptoyou.Pleaseletmeknowifyouwantmetobuythesedictionaries.

Yours,

LiYue

李允回答:
  总体不错.但有点生硬,有几个小错误.把hasincluded改为includes好些,因为这是对事实的叙述,用一般现在时态好些.把takes改为costs好些,虽然都有花费的意思,但若果用takes的话,最好后面要加todosth.还有50...
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