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【请帮忙检查语法,Withmorethan2yearsofexperienceinsimilarcapacityinmanufacturingenterprises,andhavepassedthe***trainingcourse,IfeelthatIwouldbeanexcellentcandidate.这句话的语法正确吗?请高手指教,】
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请帮忙检查语法,

Withmorethan2yearsofexperienceinsimilarcapacityinmanufacturingenterprises,andhavepassedthe***trainingcourse,IfeelthatIwouldbeanexcellentcandidate.

这句话的语法正确吗?请高手指教,

邓学华回答:
  andhavepassed应改为andhavingpassed,   IfeelthatIwouldbe说得没有底气,改为:Iconsidermyselftobe显得自信多了
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