问题标题：
我写的雅思柱状图小作文,这句话写的有错误么intermsofthesecondbarchart,thescientistsandtechniciansindevelopingcountriesweremerely10per1000peoplewhichquarterofthatinindustrialisedcountries(40/1000)in1980.图
问题描述：
我写的雅思柱状图小作文,这句话写的有错误么
intermsofthesecondbarchart,thescientistsandtechniciansindevelopingcountriesweremerely10per1000peoplewhichquarterofthatinindustrialisedcountries(40/1000)in1980.
图的意思就是1980developingcountries是10,industrialisedcountries是40,我这样表达有问题么,另外这样写好不好?
还有这句!麻烦咯comparingwithdevelopingcountries,therewasmerelyaslightgrowby5/1000people.
金鑫回答：
1.whichquarterofthatinindustrialisedcountries(40/1000)in1980.
这里应该是whichwasquarterofthatinindustrialisedcountries(40/1000)in1980.吧!aquarterof四分之一的意思啊～
2.therewasmerelyaslightgrowby5/1000people.
这里应该是growth啊,名词形式啊
刚考完雅思,记得蛮清楚的～
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