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大概就是说富国该不该帮助穷国发展?
Thereisanargumentthatwhetherdevelopedcountriesshouldofferhelptopoorercountriesiftheycannotaffordtheenoughcostondomesticeducation,onhospitalsandonthebusinesswithforeigncountries.Personally,Isupposerichercountriesneedtofinancethecountriesinvolvedwithpoverty.Itiswell-knownthatwesterncountrieshadmadegreatchangesaftertheIndustrialRevolution,fromthenon,avarietyofcapitalizedcountrieswentontoaroadtofortunewithoutanystagger.Manyraw-materials,laborsandmoneyflewintothesequickdevelopingcountriesfromtheircolonywhichmostlyarerecognizedaspoorercountriestodaywherealmostlocatedinAfricaandsomepartsofAsia.
Leavingasidethesehistoricreasons,moderntechnologyhasbroughttheEarthintoavillage,thatistosay,everycountryismuchmoreeasilyinfluencedbyothersthaneverbefore.Richcountriescannothighlydevelopbythemselveswithoutsupportfromdevelopingcountries.Sothat,wecanputresponsibilityofrichcountriesintoaccountwhenwearediscussingtheproblemofpoverty.Incontrary,somepeople,butnotmost,thoughtthepoorercountriesshouldnotbefinancializedbyrichcountries.Actually,contributetothiskindofview,wearenowfacingtheproblemofterrorismallovertheworld.Thegreatdifferencebetweentherichandthepaupercreatetheuncertaintyandinstabilityofhuman'sfuture.
Allinall,Ideeplyagreewiththeideaaboutrichcountriestakingmoreresponsibilityonhelpingthepoorercounterparts.Thatisessentialtothefinalconcordofallthehumanbeings.