英语高手帮忙检查一下这一篇文章有什么语病或用词不当!谢谢!如有不当,请修改后给我.TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalfortheChinesepeopleandiswhenallfamilymembersgettogether,justlikeChrist|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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英语高手帮忙检查一下这一篇文章有什么语病或用词不当!谢谢!如有不当,请修改后给我.TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalfortheChinesepeopleandiswhenallfamilymembersgettogether,justlikeChrist

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英语高手帮忙检查一下这一篇文章有什么语病或用词不当!谢谢!

如有不当,请修改后给我.

TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalfortheChinesepeopleandiswhenallfamilymembersgettogether,justlikeChristmasintheWest.Allthepeopleliveawayfromhomegoback..

ItisinJanuaryorFebruary.Onthatday,childrenwearnewclothes.IntheeveningbeforetheSpringFestival,familiesgettogetherandhaveabigmealandwatchSpringFestivalGala.Allthepeopleareveryhappy.

PeoplecelebrateSpringFestivalinmanyways.Theyalwayseatdunmplingsandcleantheirhouses.PeopleputNewYearscrollsonthewallforgoodfortune.TheSpringFestivallastsabout15dayslong.Peoplevisitrelativesandfriendswiththewords“Haveallyourwishes”.Inmanyplacespeopleliketoletofffireworks.

Childrenlikethefestivalverymuch,becausetheycanhavedeliciousfoodandwearnewclothes.Theycanalsogetredpacketfromtheirparents.Thismoneygivesthechildrengoodluck.

PeopleenjoytheSpringFestival,duringthistimetheycanhaveagoodrest.

在线等~~急呀~~

顾涛回答：

　　修改：1....anditiswhenallfamily. 　　2.Peoplewholiveawayfromhomeshallallgetback.定语从句的引导词丢了. 　　3.It大写　　5.OntheeveoftheSpringFestival,... 　　6.Everyoneisveryhappy. 　　7.theSpringFestival,冠词没加. 　　9.always一词应当去掉. 　　12.Haveallyourwishes,这是你自己创造出来的问候语吧?不如用Bestwishestoyouall. 　　16.Thismoneyissupposedtobringthechildrengoodluck. 　　以上仅是把你的语法错误更正了一下,风格什么的没有动.我觉得你写的有点逻辑混乱,层次不分明.可以自己再改改.

陈冬维回答：

　　那你再帮我改改文章被

顾涛回答：

　　TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalfortheChinese.ItistheChineseNewYearwhenallfamilymembersgettogether,justlikeChristmasintheWest.Allthepeoplelivingawayfromhomegoback.ItisusuallyinJanuaryorFebruaryandlastsabout15dayslong.TwoweeksbeforetheSpringFestival,peoplehavestartedtocleantheirhousesandgetallthematerialsneededready.PeoplecelebratetheSpringFestivalinmanyways.TheyputscrollsonthewallandplayfirecrackersinmanypartsofChinaforgoodfortune.OntheeveoftheSpringFestival,allfamilymembershaveabigdinnerandwatchtheSpringFestivalGalatogether.OntheChineseNewYear’sDay,childrenwearnewclothes.Peoplevisitrelativesandfriendsandwishoneanothergoodwishes.Everybodyishappy.Foradult,theSpringFestivalisatimewhentheycanhaveagoodrest.Forchildrenitislikecarnivalbecausetheycanhavedeliciousfoodandwearnewclothes.Anotherreasonisthattheygetredpacketsfromtheirparentsandrelatives.Thismoneyissupposedtobringchildrengoodluck.(再写一个结尾就比较完整了)

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