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求批阅英文作文OnReadingRecently,ahotissuehasbeenpushtotopaboutwhatisReading.Exactlymaybe[possibly]whatisReadingletusbe.Somepeopleholdthatreadingisathingforfunmerely.Intheiropinion,theychoosereading[Choosetodo
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求批阅英文作文

OnReading

Recently,ahotissuehasbeenpushtotopaboutwhatisReading.Exactlymaybe[possibly]whatisReadingletusbe.

Somepeopleholdthatreadingisathingforfunmerely.Intheiropinion,theychoosereading[Choosetodo]asanapproachwhentheyareatleisureforapureenjoyment.Tobehonest,wedoesgetmanyhappinessfromreadingnovels.

WhileSomepeoplebelieveandinsistthatreadingshould"improveusandenlargeus".Foryearsfromprimaryschooltomiddleschoolandcollege.Adirectlearningstyleisreadingthetextbooks.What'smore,whenwearepuzzled,down,quiteafewpeoplewillfindthemselvesagainthroughabookontotheirhearts.Readingteachesthemmanythingslike"howtolive","whoami","keepabeautifulmind",manyandmany.

Asforme,Icannotagreewiththelatterviewanymore.ManytimeswhenILosetemperorIamupset.ReadingabooklikechickenSoupForSoulisaquiteEfficientwaytocalmmedown.Ideemnothingcouldprovidemorefavorthanreading.andIbelieveanincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizeit.

马冲慧回答:
  第二行的push-pushed   第二段最后一行的DO应该是表强调吧?如果是强调意的话要用do不是does,   后面的happiness不可数,many要改much,错误差不多了,暂时就看到这些   提个小建议的,倒数第三行的quite改成fairly更恰当一点,而且词汇比较高级,比quite舒服一点   小建议,
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