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请帮我修改英语日记2010-4-10SaturdayRainyItwasalongday.Ihadainterviewinafarplaceat9:30soIgotupearlytocatchbus.UnluckilyIwaslisteningradiowithmyearphonewhentheconductressannoucedthestopIwantedtogo.WhenI
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请帮我修改英语日记

2010-4-10SaturdayRainy

Itwasalongday.

Ihadainterviewinafarplaceat9:30soIgotupearlytocatchbus.UnluckilyIwaslisteningradiowithmyearphonewhentheconductressannoucedthestopIwantedtogo.WhenIrealizedthat,20minuteshadpassedalready.So,Iwaslatefinally.AfterIfinishedmywrittentestandwentoutofthebuilding,itstartedraining,butIdidnotbringmyumbrella.Plus,theplaceforinterviewwasreallyreallyfarfromwherewrittentestwasholded.Igottherewet.Idrawoutmycellphone,askingtheinterviewertopickmeup,onlyfoundthatitdidn'twork.It'sbroken.Anotherintervieweemadeacall,wewaitedfor20minutesuntilagirlcametopickusup.Theinterviewbotched.OnmywaybacktodormIcatchedawrongbusagainasIwantedtoleaveeariler.Thelongestoneratherthanawrongone,Iguess.Itstopped55stopsbeforearriving!

Igottomydormexhausted.Itookashowerquickly,wenttolayonmybed,turnonmycomputer,clickedhereandtherewiththemouse,findingsomethingtokillsometimebeforefallingintosleep.MaybeitwasthatIwassotired,nothingwasexcitingforme,untilIfoundanovelinadeepfileofmyharddisc.Ireadit.It'swrittenbyme.It'saboutmycollegelife.BeforetodayIalmosthaveforgottentheexistenceofit.

Manythingswererecalled,funnythings,stupidthingsandbadthingsIdidbefore.Iclosedmyeyesnowandthen,thinkingaboutallthethingsIhadlostinthepastcoupleofyears,timesgoneforeverandpeopledisapperedfrommylife,neverimaginingthatIcouldrecallthosethingsinsuchdetail.Icouldsmellthefoodsofcafeteria.Icouldhearthevoicesofthem.Ireadonwithoutabreak,untilmyroomiecameback.Asuddenpangofsadnesshitme.IrealizedthatIcannevergobacktothoseday,thoseshiningdaysinmylife.Timegoesby,thingschanged.

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  April10,2010   TodayisrainySaturday.Tomeisalongday.   Ihadainterviewinafarplaceat9:30.SoIgotupearlytocatchbus.Unluckly,IlistenedradiousemyearphonewhentheconductressannoucedthestopIwantedtogo.WhenIrealizedthat,20minuteshaspassedalready.Sofinally,Iwaslate.AfterIfinishedmywritetestandthenwentoutofthebuilding.Itisstartedraining,butIdidnotbringmyumbrella.Plus,theplaceforinterviewwasreallyreallyfarfromwherewritetestwashold.WhenIgotthere,Iwaswet.Itookoutmycellphone,askedtheinterviewertopickmeup,.Ifounditdidn'tworkisbroken.It'sbroken.Anotherintervieweemadeacall,Iwaitedfor20minutesuntilagirlcametopickusup.Theinterviewbotched.Onmywaybacktodorm,Icaughtawrongbusagain.AsIwantedtoleavemoreearly.Thelongestoneratherthanawrongone,Iguess.Itstopped55stopsbeforearriving.   WhenIgottomydorm,Iexhausted.Iquicklytookashowerandwenttolayonmybed.Thenturnonmycomputertoclickhereandtherewiththemouse,foundsomethingtokillsometimebeforefallingintosleep.MaybeitwasthatIwassotired,nothingwasexcitingforme,untilIfoundanovelinadeepfileofmyharddisc.Ireadit.It'swrittenbyme.Itwasaboutmycollegelife.BeforetodayIalmosthaveforgottentheexistenceofit.   Manythingsrecalledinmymind,funnythings,stupidthingsandbadthingsthatIdidbefore.IclosedmyeyesandthenthinkingaboutallthethingsIhadlostinthepastcoupleofyears,timesgoneforeverandpeopledisapperedfrommylife.NeverimaginingthatIcouldrecallthosethingsinsuchdetail.Icouldsmellthefoodsofcafeteria.Icouldhearthevoicesofthem.Ireadonwithoutabreak,untilmyroomcameback.Suddenly,pangofsadnesshitme.IrealizedthatIcannevergobacktothoseday.Thoseshiningdaysinmylife.Timegoingbythingschanging.   改过一些,你看看吧
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