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【高考英语作文修改II.GuidedWriting:根据你现在学习的实际情况,谈谈您的高考志愿(collegeapplication).你的作文必须包括以下内容.1.简要描述您的学习情况.2.你梦想进的大学.3.说明你可以考进梦】
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高考英语作文修改

II.GuidedWriting:根据你现在学习的实际情况,谈谈您的高考志愿(collegeapplication).你的作文必须包括以下内容.1.简要描述您的学习情况.2.你梦想进的大学.3.说明你可以考进梦想大学的理由.Astimegoesby,iwillattendtheGaoKaoinnextyear.Franklyspeaking,idon'tthinkihaveanyoutstandingtalent.Mystudyingisinmedium,andihaven'thighambitionbutself-knowledge.Havebeenconsideredforalongtime,idecidetoattendShanghaiFisheriesUniversity.Firstofall,scorelineofShanghaiFisheriesUniversityisfitforme.Neithertoohightometolosingmyconfidence,nottooeasytometolosingmylearningmotivation.What'smore,iprefertolearnknowledgewhichisaboutplantsandanimalsratherthanstudyboringbookknowledge.Finally,nowadaysmoreandmoreviewonseawhichcontainlargeamountofresources,ibelievethatwhatichosenwillplayaimportantroleinthefuture.Maybemychoiceinothereyesisnotdifficultandmeaningless.However,combinedwithmypracticeistherightchoiceforme.Ihopeiwillsuccessandnotregretinthefuture感觉完全写的离题了,修改下内容和语法结构之类的就行了,不抱希望

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  高考应该是collegeentranceexamination吧Astimegoesby,Iwillattendthecollegeentranceexaminationnextyear(我觉得in去掉比较通顺).Franklyspeaking,idon'tthinkihaveanyoutstandingtalent.M...
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