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我的雅思小作文谁能帮忙改改writingtest1AccordingtothechartthatshowssomefiguresofJapanesetouriststravellingabroad.Fromthetablewecanclearlyseethatintheyearbetween1985and1995,moreandmoreJapaneseperfertotrav
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我的雅思小作文谁能帮忙改改

writingtest1

AccordingtothechartthatshowssomefiguresofJapanesetouriststravellingabroad.Fromthetablewecanclearlyseethatintheyearbetween1985and1995,moreandmoreJapaneseperfertotravellingabroad,ratherthantourintheirowncountry.

Inthe5yearsspanningfrom1985through1990,thefigurehadasteadlyincresasefrom4milliontoover10million.In1991,thenumberhaddecreased.Thereisaconsiderableincreaseoccuredfrom1993to1995.Therewasnealy4milliongrowthinthethreeyearsspanningfrom1993through1995.

ThesecondgraphwhichisthepersentageofAstraliashareofJapanesetouristmarket.Thereis2%Japanesetouristtraveledin1995.Fromthisyearon,figureuptothepeak.therewasagradualgrowthinthe1988,thefigurereachingnear5%.

Inthefinalanalysis,icanconcludethatmoreandmoreJapaneseperfertotravellingabroad.Themarketisinternational.

唐柳英回答:
  我不知道你的题目是什么,所以很难帮你改,但是你第一句就错了啦.帮你改一下第一段吧.ThechartsshowthetrendofJapanesemarketfrom1985to1995(写这两个图表反映的是什么主体).Asshowninthefirsttabl...
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