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帮忙看看语法On11October1921,inBombay,MohandasK.Gandhisetafireonapileofforeignmadeclothesasthefirststepofthelongtermcampaignofboycottingbritishgoods.TheSwadeshicampaignthatGandhilaunchedwasreallystirring.Gandhi
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On11October1921,inBombay,MohandasK.Gandhisetafireonapileofforeignmadeclothesasthefirststepofthelongtermcampaignofboycottingbritishgoods.
TheSwadeshicampaignthatGandhilaunchedwasreallystirring.Gandhimadeaspeech.
Hestated:“Oursisnotadriveforpower,butpurelyanon-violentfightforIndia’sindependence.
GandhihasaskedeveryIndianstowearhomemadeclothes,andtoputalltheforeignclothestogetherandburnitwithfire.
Thedaywassunnyandwarm,Gandhistoodhathpaceofthesquareandtherewerecrowdsaroundhim,womanandmanwereshouting.whenGandhiraisedhishand,everyonebecamequiet.
Heannounced:“First,Itwasthedutyofindianstoinformthesepoythatiswaswrongtohelpagovernmentwhichhadforfeitedtheconfidenceofthecountry.”
汪丹回答:
语法上没有问题.就是结构太单一了
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