我写的英语作文,写的匆忙,里面有大量低级语法错误,但我查不出,会有好报的!

IreadabookabouthimwhenIstudyinmiddle-school.Sincethat,Ican’tforgethim.Heistallandisnothandsome.ButheisanAmericanandagiant,comeinforpeople‘sreverence.Youareright,heisAbrahamLincoln.

AbrahamLincoln（1809-1865）

InAmerica,AbrahamLincolnwasthesixteenthpresident.Heledagreatwarwhichwassavethecommonwealthandendstheslavery.Heisthegreatestpresidentintheunitedofstates.

Butyouknowallhislifewasfilledwithhardshipandfrustration.Hewasborninaneedyfamily,inHardinCounty,Kentucky,onFebruary12th,1809.Usehisownwordstogeneralizewas“apoorsimplechronicle”.9yearsoldthemotherdie,thisisacrueldeed,luckyhisstepmothernamedNancywasvirtuous.15yearsoldjuststarttostudybecauseofNancy’sopinion.Sheisanimportantpersoninhislife.24yearsoldhegoesintopartnershipwithpersontodobusiness,butdidnotsuccess,andthereforeowedfor15years;25yearsoldhisfirstloveAnniedie,thismadehimpainfulsadandsincethatheusuallyappearedblackemotion;32yearsoldhemarriedwithMary,butafterthatLincolndidn'tlikereturnhomebecauseofhiswife'sirascibletemper.hebegintocampaignpublicposition,almostlosteverytime;butwhenhewas52yearsoldhewinedtheAmericanpresident,duringthistimethewarbetweenthestatesbreakout,itmadeLincolnfedupwithtorture,duetothesouthatadisadvantage,butthenorthoverandoveragainlosesinthebattlefield,whenLincolnwas56yearsoldthewarendsfinally,Lincolnalsowinsapresidentagain,buthewasassassinatedattheFordtheaterenjoyaplay.

Lincolnlikestosmile,becauseitcouldmakehimhavearestfromendlessagonyandlessenhispress.Lincolnlikestospeakjokes,too.Whenhespeaksajoke,hisfacewillputlight,hiseyeswillbright,hisvoicewillshiver,andsometimeshelikeachildwillfirstlaugh.Buthiswholelifewasspentinendlesscrucifixion.frustrationwasthemainmelodycantusofhislife,ButLincolnstillstoodtocomeover,keepingtillthelastamoment!IntheAmerican'sheart,hisprestigeevenexceededWashington.