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请帮我改一篇高中英语作文,.Sheiswillingtohelpothers,andshehasapositiveattitudetowardseverything.Lastweek,shehelpedanoldmanwhoisseriouslyhurtinthelegonthewaytoschool.Worried,shesenthimtothehospital.Beforel
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请帮我改一篇高中英语作文,.Sheiswillingtohelpothers,andshehasapositiveattitudetowardseverything.Lastweek,shehelpedanoldmanwhoisseriouslyhurtinthelegonthewaytoschool.Worried,shesenthimtothehospital.Beforelong,theoldmanfeltbetterandthanksLiualotThereisnodoubtthatLIUdidarightthing.Asforme,IwoulddothesameifIhadbeeninthatsituation.Actually,someonewilltreatitastrpuble,becauseitisdifficultforthemtotrustastranger,evenifanoldman.AsfarasIamconcerned,itisourdutytohelpthosewhoareintrouble.Onlybythiswaycanwemakeourselvesbetterandbetter.

耿振鸿回答:
  shehelpedanoldmanwhois改为was   onthewaytoschool,the改成her,不然指代不明,是老人去学校还是she   worried是担心的,形容词,不能直接开头.shewasworriedabouthim,soshe……   themanfeltbetterandthanks(改为thanked)   Iwoulddothesame(+thing)   trouble拼错了
盛明兰回答:
  说起来不是有一种形容词作状语的句式吗
耿振鸿回答:
  恩,可以这么用的   我给忘记了
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