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“目标”在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用,在高三尤为重要。请你结合自身实际,按以下提示,准备一篇英语发言稿,在英语课上与同学们作交流。目标的重要性;如何设立目标;
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“目标”在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用,在高三尤为重要。请你结合自身实际,按以下提示,准备一篇英语发言稿,在英语课上与同学们作交流。
目标的重要性;
如何设立目标;
谈谈你的近期目标;
如何实现你的目标。
注意:
1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dearclassmates,
It’sagreathonortohaveachancetospeakhere.TodayI’dliketosharemythoughtaboutgoalswithyou.
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Wishyoutorealizeyourdreams.That’sall.Thankyou! 

贾淑娟回答:
  Onepossibleversion:Dearclassmates,It’sagreathonortohaveachancetospeakhere.TodayI’dliketosharemythoughtaboutgoalswithyou.Thereisnodenyingthatgoalsareimportantespeciallyforseniorsbecausetheyactasmapsguidingyoutowhereyouareheadingfor.Withacleardirectionyouwillstraightlygetwhatyouwant.Inmyview,goalsarenotdifficulttoset.First,youshouldmakeclearwhatyoureallywant.What’smore,it’sessentialtomakedetailedplanswhichcanbecarriedoutstepbystep.Myshort-termaimistoperformwonderfullyinthecomingexamsothatIcanstepintoanidealuniversitytofulfillmydream.Toachievethis,notonlywillIsparenoeffortandmakefulluseofeveryminutetobeprepared,butalsoIwillkeepanpositiveattitudetowardsupsanddownsinlife.(127)Wishyoutorealizeyourdreams.That’sall.Thankyou!   试题解析:从文章体裁分析,本文是一篇记叙文的写作,主要让学生以“目标在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用,在高三尤为重要”为主题展开叙述,内容应从包括以下四个方面来:一:目标的重要性。二:如何设立目标。三:谈谈你的近期目标。四:如何实现你的目标。【亮点说明】文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如headfor朝…走,youwillstraightlygetwhatyouwant你将直接得到你想要的东西(what引导的名词性从句),Myshort-termaimistoperformwonderfullyinthecomingexamsothatIcanstepintoanidealuniversitytofulfillmydream.(sothat引导的目的状语从句)notonlywillIsparenoeffortandmakefulluseofeveryminutetobeprepared,butalsoIwillkeepanpositiveattitudetowardsupsanddownsinlife.(notonly…butalso引导的并列句,且位于句首构成了倒装句,并且主语了句子的衔接如:What’smore,Inmyview等。
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