问题标题：
【Intheloveriver.Wearefullyconvincedthateverybodymustbeenlovedtheotherhalfofthem.Theydon`twanttopartwithherorhislover,unlessthedeathcoming.Everytinygirlwantshaveastrongshouderlikeabeautifulbirdbeintheposse】
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Intheloveriver.Wearefullyconvincedthateverybodymustbeenlovedtheotherhalfofthem.Theydon`twanttopartwithherorhislover,unlessthedeathcoming.Everytinygirlwantshaveastrongshouderlikeabeautifulbirdbeinthepossessionofaslpendidtree.Home,warmandcarm.Everysucceedmanwantstohaveagracefulwomanbewithhim.Likeanraretreasureisinpossessionofaeconomicalman.
TOloveandtobelovedistheisthegreatesthappinessofexistence.
Ifyoudon`tthinkso.
Trytoloveaperson.
不是不是然后想说下partwith能这样用么分开其实我们老师是让用notunless和befullyconvincedthat和beinthepossessionofsb和beinpossessionofsb四个词组写文章的
请指数我的错误和改正我还给加分的
公剑回答：
partwith是想表达“分开”的意思吗?如果是,应该是partcompanywith/fromsb.这是“离开,分手,断绝关系”的意思.
还有,我个人觉得Wearefullyconvincedthateverybodymustbelovedbytheirlover.顺一点.
succeed是动词,不能修饰man,可以用succeeded.
（个人意见,仅供参考哦!）
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