帮忙改改托福作文TPO4的综合写作,顺便评个分Accordingtothereadingpassage,theauthorclaimsthatdinosaurswaslongassumedthattheywerenotendothermsbutnowtherearemanyconsiderableevidenceshowthatdinosaurswereendothe|小学作文问答-字典翻译问答网

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帮忙改改托福作文TPO4的综合写作,顺便评个分Accordingtothereadingpassage,theauthorclaimsthatdinosaurswaslongassumedthattheywerenotendothermsbutnowtherearemanyconsiderableevidenceshowthatdinosaurswereendothe

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帮忙改改托福作文TPO4的综合写作,顺便评个分

Accordingtothereadingpassage,theauthorclaimsthatdinosaurswaslongassumedthattheywerenotendothermsbutnowtherearemanyconsiderableevidenceshowthatdinosaurswereendotherms.However,theprofessorrufutesthepointofviewoftheauthorbysayingthatevidencegivenbythereadingpassageisnotconvincing.

Althoughthereadingpassagementionsthatthefossilsofdinosaursdiscoveredinpolarregionsshowedthatdinosaurswereendothermsbecauseonlyanimalsthatcanmantainatemperaturecouldbeactiveinsuchcoldclimates,thelecturercountersthatthosediscoverieswerenotthecasesincedinosaurscouldmigratetoanotherplacewhentheclimateinthepolarregionturnedtobecold.Also,dinosaurscouldhibernatetoaviodthecoldclimate.

Whenthereadingpassageindicatesthattheconnectionsbetweentheendothermandthepositionandmovementoftheleg,whichweresimilartothepositionofmodernendotherms,canstronglysuggetsthatdinosaurswereendotherms,theprofessorcastsdoubtontheopiionsoftheauthorbysayingthatthesizesofdinosaurswereverybigsothat'swhytheirlegsshouldbeundemeaththeirbody,itdidnotmeanthatthepositionofthelegsindicatestheintenceofefficientrunning.

Incontrasttothereadingpassage.whichpointsoutthatthedinosaurs'bonestructurestronglysuggestthattheywereendothermsbecausedinosaursgrewveryfast,theprofessorassertsthateveninverycoldweather,dinosauralsogrewrapidly,butthisphenomenonwasnotexistedinendotherms.

Inconclusion,whenthereadingpassagementionsthatdinosaurswereendotherms,theprofessorrepudiatestheviewofthereadingpassageandindicatesthatthoseevidencearenotconvincing.

兰旭光回答：

　　dinosaurswas改成were 　　evidenceshow改成showing 　　等等. 　　句子写得比较好,也很流早,但就是语法欠缺.加强语法,作文就不错了.

林二一回答：

　　大概可以得多少分呢？

兰旭光回答：

　　得到总分数的60%-70%。