英语读后感修改
企鹅英语简易读物里的凯伦与艺术家读后感修改
时间很短错误很多
AreviewonKarenandtheArtist
Thisbooktellusainterestingstory,Itisaboutagirlandaboy.ThegirlcalledKaren.Sheisanairhostessandshehasbeentomanyplaces.OncewhensheinRome,shegoestoacafé.Andseessomebeautifulpicturesonthewall.Shelikesthepictures.Sosheasksthebarmanwhodrawit.Andthebarmantellshethatamangotohiscafétoeatfoodsanddrink.Butnevergivehimmoney.Heonlygivehimsomepictures.Andbychancethemancomesintothecafé.Andwanttoeatanddrink.Thebarmandon’tgivehimsomefoodbecausehehasnomoney,onlyapicture.ButKarenlikeshispictures.Andknowthemanisverypoor.Soshedecidestosellhispicturesforhim.Butnoonebuyhispictures.Becausenooneknowhe.AndKarenseesamansellpicturewithasentence:ThisisXXX’spicture.He’sgotanexhibitionattheXXXinXXX.SointhiswayKarensellsomepicturesbythismanandgetssomemoneyforthispoorartist.
Afterreadingit.Iknowthecommunityisverymuchfalse.eventhoughnomatterhowgoodyouropus.butalsoneedhonor.ToDaVinci'slittle-knownworkgivetoaartgalleries,mayalsobeunwanted.
希望不只是一句话,能具体的改一改,