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Inmanycountries,workersover60canstillbefoundintheworkplace.However,somepeoplethinkitmaycausesomesocialproblemsandtheyshouldgetretired.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

Nowadays,theaverageageofpopulationsintheentireworldisraisingupgradually,insomecountries,governmentadoptsschemessuchasupwardthestandardageofretiretomaintaintheproductivityoutput.Howeversomesociologistsclaimthatelderemployeestakemanypotentialriskstothesociety,andtheyapprovetoretirethepeoplewhoover60butstillworking.Undertheargumentibelievethatanegativeinfluencewillcomingtooursocietypromptlyifwedecidetoretirethematall.

Thereasonleadtoscarcefreshproductivityinthenewcenturymarketingduetothelimitationofregenerationofbirthinthelargestpopulationofcountryintheworld--China.AsthecommonrecognitionsthatalthoughChinahasthe1/5populationofworld,manyevidencesprovethattherearetwooverthreeofpopulationoverorclosetotheageofretirestandard.Thereforethegovernmenthadtoadjustthepolitiestoavoidanyunstablesocialstatementwhichincludeinflation,urgentproductivity,socialviolencehappening.Underthiscircumstancegovernmentsneedtoreconsidertheconsequencepeoplewhogetretiredover60beforetheproblemscouldcausedtokeepthemontheposition.

Moreover,followthedeteriorationofphysicalcondition,oldpeopleisnotabletoperformthesamequalityworkasstrongandaccurateastheyoungs,howevertheadvantagesofoldpeopleonespeciallyareasareapparentlyimportant.Afallintoapit,Againinyourwitmeanstoelderswhohaveabundantlyexperienceontheirworkinghistory,theyhaveexcellentabilitytocoachingorpaperworksuchasteacher,accountantorgovernmentofficials.Socialdevelopmentnotonlyrequirethecontributionofourdescendants,alsotheknowledgefromoldpeopleissignificantandnecessary.

Intheconclusion,whetherthegovernmentsraisethestandardofretireageforprotectsocialstabilize,orsociologistsconfirmthattheoldpeoplehavebeensufferingonthepressureofworkingandspurringthesocialproblems,inmystandpointtosolvetheproblem,weshouldreplaceoldpeoplefromda