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这篇作文有错误吗?Ihavemanyhobbies,forexample:Studies,theice-skating,towatchthetelevision,studiesisImostlikes.Ilikestudyhavethreereasons:First,thebooksleadmetoenteranewworld,thisworlddoesnothavethespaceandtime
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Ihavemanyhobbies,forexample:Studies,theice-skating,towatchthetelevision,studiesisImostlikes.Ilikestudyhavethreereasons:First,thebooksleadmetoenteranewworld,thisworlddoesnothavethespaceandtimelimitcolorfully.Throughstudying,ImaytraceoccupythegenerationofEgypt--thishumanculturethecradle.ThebookcanbringmetoarriveUS,thatIhavewantedtotourisfullofthecharmtheplace.Next,studiescanunfoldthenewspaceinfrontofme,causesmetobeperfect.zaiguoqudijinianzhong,mymajorityknowledgeareobtainthroughthebooks.Throughreading,Ihavelearnedfromthemtomanypeopleinaspectandsoonscience,politics,lifeandsocietythought.Oncemore,studiesbetweenminedreamandthegoalbuildsafactorybridge.Toobtainsuccessfullyinfutureworkprofession,Imustinsistthatwillstudy,thethoughtandthepractice.studiesapartwhichalreadybecamemetolive.EverydayIspendsometimetostudyreadanewspaper,readthemagazine.Evening,abookIhasnotbeenverydifficulttogotosleepinthehand.

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  第一句studies应该是studying吧.watch应该是watching吧.第二句studiesismymostlike.是studyingismyfavourite.第三句Ilikestudystudying.或者tostudysorry.后面的看不懂.没学过...
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