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高手帮看有没有语法/单词错误Ihavemanyhobbies,suchasreading,skating,andwatchingTV.Butreadingismyfavoritehobby.Ilikereadingforthreereasons.Firstofall,booksintroducemetoanewworld,whichiscolourfulandwithouttime
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高手帮看有没有语法/单词错误

Ihavemanyhobbies,suchasreading,skating,andwatchingTV.Butreadingismyfavoritehobby.Ilikereadingforthreereasons.Firstofall,booksintroducemetoanewworld,whichiscolourfulandwithouttimeandspacelimit,Throughreading,Icantraceback.toancientEgypt,thecradleofhumancivilization.ItcanbringmyselftotheUnitedstates,aglamorouslandIhavebeenlongingtovisit.Secondly,readingcanbettermyselfbyshowingmeanewhorizon.Inthepastyears,mostofmyknowledgehasbeenobtainedfrombooks.Ihavelearnedfrommanypeoplebyreadingabouttheirideasonscithee,politics,lifeandsociety.Thirdly,readingbridgethegapbetweenmydreamandmygoal.Inordcrtosucceedinmycareerinthefuture,Imustkeepreading,thinkingandpractising.Readinghasbecomepartofmylife.Everyday,Ispendsometimereadingbooks,newspapcrsandmagazines.Atnight,Icanhardlygotosteepwithoutanovelinmyhand.

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  有些小地方要修改:1.第二行whichiscolourfulandwithouttime...中的and应该去掉.2.第三行limit和Throughreading之间是句号,icantracebackto中间没有句号,这些都是笔误吧:)3.第四行主题It指代不明,...
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