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帮忙点评一下我的英语作文MYFAVORITEWAYTOSCHOOLTherearemanykindsoftransportationintheworld.Studentshavetochooseoneofthewaystoschool.Someliketogotherebycarandsomeliketogotherebybike.Forme,I'dliketotake
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帮忙点评一下我的英语作文
MYFAVORITEWAYTOSCHOOL
Therearemanykindsoftransportationintheworld.Studentshavetochooseoneofthewaystoschool.Someliketogotherebycarandsomeliketogotherebybike.Forme,I'dliketotakeschoolbusesbetter.Butwhy?
First,itissofetodoso.Mostofthepeopleontheschoolbusesarestudents.Andthedriversdriveverywell.Sowedon'thaveanydangertodoso.
Secondly,itisveryconvenienttodoso.Yoncangotoschoolinthiswaywhereveryouare.Andthestopcanbenearyourhome.Youmaynottowalktoolong.
Inoneword,Ilikegoingtoschoolbusbest.Howdoyouliketogotoschool?
符健回答:
大约扣两分,Secondly改为second,schoolbus中加by
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