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我要用英文自我介绍希望有高人能帮我改正改正....I'amPeter,theyoungestbetweenthetwochildreninmyfamily.I'amsilent,Iselldomtotalkwithother,butIlikelistioningwhataretheytalkingabout.I'mhelpfulandpatient.Ialwa
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我要用英文自我介绍希望有高人能帮我改正改正....
I'amPeter,theyoungestbetweenthetwochildreninmyfamily.I'amsilent,Iselldomtotalkwithother,butIlikelistioningwhataretheytalkingabout.I'mhelpfulandpatient.IalwayshelpmyfriendwhatcanIdo.(我的意思:只要我能帮我都会帮)Theyalwysplayatrickonme.Ijustsmile.Ilikewatchingmovieaslovestory,funnyandnatural.IalwaysthinkingbutIdon'tlikeit.Icannotcontrolmymind.Ilovefree.Mydreamisbuyabeautifulhouseingoodplacewherehavehill,lakeandtreesaroundit.
蒋耀林回答：
个人感觉你这个太别扭了,我给小改了一下,更口语化一点
I'amPeter.Iamtheyoungeroneinmyfamily.I'amsilentboy.andcomparingtalkingIwouldratherlistioningtotheotherssilently.I'malsoawarmheartedboy,alwaystrytohelponmybest.Theyalwysplayatrickonme.(这句我没明白你是想说什么,是说你的朋友经常戏弄你,骗你吗.trick这个词基本上是个贬义词)butIjustsmileitaway.
Ilikewatchingmoviesespeciallythosewithhumour,loveornatural.
AndIalwayskeepthinking,ponderingandmusing,andIcannotstopevensometimesIdon'treallylikeit.(这句话也没太看明白,是不是想说,我总是不停地思考,而且无法停止.)
Ilovetobefree.(不要用楼上说的freedom,这个词太重了,看过“勇敢的心”和“爱国者”没,那才能叫freedom,举例来说,假如你是个爱尔兰共和军闹独立,那你的愿望才真能叫做freedom)
Mydreamishave(我个人感觉“拥有”要比“购买”显得不那么功利,要不喜欢可以自己改过来)abeautifulhousesurroundedbyprofectview,likeonahillbythelakewithwoodsaround.
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