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求高手修改2011考研作文请高手帮我修改下,顺便给个分.图画是在雪地上有一个赈灾捐款的箱子,箱子边上的雪都融化了Thisisawarmandthought-provokingpicture.Asisshowninthecartoon,inthewinterstandsad
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求高手修改2011考研作文

请高手帮我修改下,顺便给个分.

图画是在雪地上有一个赈灾捐款的箱子,箱子边上的雪都融化了

Thisisawarmandthought-provokingpicture.Asisshowninthecartoon,inthewinterstandsadonationboxwhichhavethawedthesnowaroundit.Itisobviousthatthedonationcanbringpeopleofthedevastatedzonenotonlymaterialsupportbutalsoinspiration.

Wecandeducefromthecartoonthatthedrawerwantstoremindustoholdlovemindsforever.Thedisatersareterribleandunfortunate.Theytakeawaypeople"swealth,healthandevenlife.However,therearenumeriouskindpersons,Theytrytheirbesttohelpthepoor,thedisabledanditslike.Asaresult,thepeopleintroublehavepowertopickupthepiecesandhaveconfidenceandcourageliveon.

WhenIreadthereportsofdonation,Ifeelsoinspiring.One"shelpisverytiny,butwhenitisaddedtogether,itshowstheunimaginablepower.Therefor,Istronglyadvocatethateverybodygiveahandtoothers.Onlywithloveandcontribution,Iamsure,wouldoursocietybecomemorebeautifulandmoreharmonious.

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  通过看你的文章,大概明白了图片信息和你要说的内容,于是在你的作文基础上作了些改的,请查看.Thisisawarmandthought-provokingcartoonpicture.Fromthepicture,wecanseethatthesnowaroundadonationb...
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