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求高人修改专四作文APollutionTaxCurrently,governmentagenciesconsiderlevyingenvironmentaltaxesonprivatecarownersaneffectivewaytoprotectenvironment,whichhasarousedaheateddiscussionamongthepublic.Withreferencetomysta
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求高人修改专四作文

APollutionTax

Currently,governmentagenciesconsiderlevyingenvironmentaltaxesonprivatecarownersaneffectivewaytoprotectenvironment,whichhasarousedaheateddiscussionamongthepublic.Withreferencetomystandpoint,privatecarownersshouldbetaxedforpollution.

Tobeginwith,itisnotfarforprivatecarowners.Noonecandenythefactthatmanypublicvehiclesarenotenvironmentalfriendly.Ifpollutiontaxesareonlyleviedonprivatecarowners,unfairnessmayabout.Evenworse,socialharmonymaybedestroyed.

Besides,itisclearthatprivatecarowners'economicburdenwillbeincreased.Becauseofapollutiontax,Asweallknow,thepriceofoilisontherise,whichhasalreadybeenaheadacheforprivatecarowners.Inthatcase,extrataxeslikeapollutiontaxmayfreakthemoutandincreasetheirfinancialburden.

Takingthethreefactorsintoaccount,Idon'tthinkitagoodmeasuretoprivatecarownersfoepollution.What'smore,governmentagenciesshouldtakeactiontodevelopnewenergytocutdowncarpollution.

可以加分(忘了设置分类了)

林尚伟回答:
  把邮箱给我,我可以发几篇我写的essay给你
金亿平回答:
  呵呵,这就不必了~~参考范文我也有很多的,总之谢谢你把刚才那提的回答粘贴过来吧,要不然采纳说不过去。。
林尚伟回答:
  Itisnotfar=>itisnotfairUnfairnessmayabout是想表达什么意思?建议修改第二段besides可以用高级一些的词来代替,如furthermore,moreover最后一段你说有三个standpoint,为什么我只看到两个?measure是测量的意思,你这是想说method吗?还有后面的foe=>for,to后少个动词就考试而言,这篇文章已经够了,但在我个人看来,这篇文章的逻辑缺乏联系,如果你想让你的写作再上一个层次,请考虑用一些例子来支持你的观点,并运用适当承接、总结语增强逻辑
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