英语高手请进,帮忙修改一篇英语作文中的语法错误Formerly,Ihadagoodfriend,shenameiscoral.Shewearsashorthairangwearsablackframeglasses.Shelooksveryclever,andhereyesalwaysshinewithwisdom.Shehasn'talotof|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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英语高手请进,帮忙修改一篇英语作文中的语法错误Formerly,Ihadagoodfriend,shenameiscoral.Shewearsashorthairangwearsablackframeglasses.Shelooksveryclever,andhereyesalwaysshinewithwisdom.Shehasn'talotof

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英语高手请进,帮忙修改一篇英语作文中的语法错误

Formerly,Ihadagoodfriend,shenameiscoral.

Shewearsashorthairangwearsablackframeglasses.Shelooksveryclever,andhereyesalwaysshinewithwisdom.Shehasn'talotofword.whensheunfamiliarwithyou,butwhensheregardsyouasherfriend,shewilltreatyouasherfamilymembers.

IlovedherverymuchwhenIfirstmether.Afterthat,webecamegoodfriendquickly.

ShewasgoodatEnglishbutpoorinchenistryandIwasjustrightcontrarywithher.Weoftenhelpwitheachother.sheoftenhasainterestingidea.sheissimpleandunaffected.IfelthappywhenIstaybyherside.Webothlikecoleflowerverymuch,weagreethatwewouldwenttoJiangXitoappreciatecoleflower.

ButonedayIquarreledwithshe.ShethinkIhadtoomuchfriendsandIalwaysneglcetedher.IfeltangryangwrongedwhenIheardthat,andIusedalotofhurefulwords.

Afterthat,sheunwillingtotooknoticeofme.Iwastoolateforregrets.

ItruelywanttotellherthatIneverneglecther.Ididknowshewasimportanttome.Iloveshe,Ican'tloseshe.ButIhardlyhavechance.

NowIlearnhowtotakegoodcareoffrienglyness,butIhavelostmylove——coral

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　　Formerly,Ihadagoodfriend,hernameiscoral. 　　Shehadashorthairandwornablackframeglasses.Shelookedveryclever,andhereyesalwaysshinedwithwisdom.Shehadn'talotofwords,whensheunfamiliarwithyoubutwhensheregardsyouasherfriend,shewouldtreatyouasherfamilymembers. 　　IlovedherverymuchwhenIfirstmether.Afterthat,webecamegoodfriendquickly. 　　ShewasgoodatEnglishbutpoorinchenistryandIwasjustrightcontrarytoher.Weoftenhelpedwitheachother.sheoftenhadainterestingidea.shewassimpleandunaffected.IfelthappywhenIstayedbyherside.Webothlikedcoleflowerverymuch,weagreedthatwewouldwenttoJiangXitoappreciatecoleflower. 　　ButonedayIquarreledwithher.ShethoughtIhadtoomanyfriendsandIalwaysneglcetedher.IfeltangrywhenIheardthat,andIusedalotofhurefulwords. 　　Afterthat,shewasunwillingtotooknoticeofme.Itwastoolatetoregret. 　　ItruelywantedtotellherthatIneverneglecther.Ididknowshewasimportanttome.Iloveshe,Ican'tloseshe.ButIhardlyhavechance. 　　NowIlearnhowtotakegoodcareoffrienglyness,butIhavelostmylove——coral