高一英语……精英请进……
大家帮忙看看我写的这篇作文,有什么不恰当的地方竟帮忙指出来……谢谢……
DearSarah,
ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.(这是题目给的没错误)
TherebuiltQianmenStreetismorethan800meterswithmorethan600yearshistory.Therearemorethan300shopshereaswellas.(此处的aswellas用的合适么?顺便讲一下aswellas与aswell的区别以及用法,谢谢……)
ItstandstothesouthofTian'anmensquare.Ifyouwanttovisitthere.youcantakebusesNo.17,69,and59.Besides,youcanalsotakethesubwayLine2.(第二句visitthere对么?visitinthere可以么?还有最后一句的是canalso还是alsocan,为什么?)
TherearesomespecialthingsallaroundQianmenStreet.suchas,pedestrianstreer,trolleycar,teahouseandtheatre,etc.thisisthespotwhichisworthoftraveling.(第一句本来想写inQianmenStreet,可是答案给的是allaround.用in可以么?allaround在此作何解释?allaround怎么用?最后一句话用的定语从句,有没有什么语法错误?请指教……)
Sobeautifulaspot,doyoulikeit?(此句sobeautifulaspot写的对么?)
谢谢各位了……如有不当之处还请多指教……