本人明年即将考研,请各位高手看看我写的这篇作文有什么问题,能得多少分?这是今年的考研原题,谢谢!
Dearpresident,
I,asaseniorstudentofouruniversity,amwritingtoexpressinthislettermydeepestconcernabouttheimprovementofstudent’sphysicalconditionandconveymyproposalaboutit.
Firstofall,itiswellknownthatjogginginthemorningisaeffectivewaytomakeourphysicalconditionbetter.Butthereexistacommonphenomenonthatfewstudentshavethishabit.Isuggestthatyoucouldmakeadisciplinethateveryoneshouldjoginthemorningat7:30—8:00am.Lastbutnotleast,lackingofadequateplacemaybeisamainfactorthatwecan’tusuallyplaybasketball.Ifmorespacecouldbeexpandedtobuildmorebasketballcourt,thereisnodoubtthattherewillbealotofstudentsplayingbasketball.
ThankyoufortakingtimereadingmyletterandIhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!
YoursSincerely,
LiMing