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本人明年即将考研,请各位高手看看我写的这篇作文有什么问题,能得多少分?这是今年的考研原题,谢谢!Dearpresident,I,asaseniorstudentofouruniversity,amwritingtoexpressinthislettermydeepestconcernabout
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本人明年即将考研,请各位高手看看我写的这篇作文有什么问题,能得多少分?这是今年的考研原题,谢谢!

Dearpresident,

I,asaseniorstudentofouruniversity,amwritingtoexpressinthislettermydeepestconcernabouttheimprovementofstudent’sphysicalconditionandconveymyproposalaboutit.

Firstofall,itiswellknownthatjogginginthemorningisaeffectivewaytomakeourphysicalconditionbetter.Butthereexistacommonphenomenonthatfewstudentshavethishabit.Isuggestthatyoucouldmakeadisciplinethateveryoneshouldjoginthemorningat7:30—8:00am.Lastbutnotleast,lackingofadequateplacemaybeisamainfactorthatwecan’tusuallyplaybasketball.Ifmorespacecouldbeexpandedtobuildmorebasketballcourt,thereisnodoubtthattherewillbealotofstudentsplayingbasketball.

ThankyoufortakingtimereadingmyletterandIhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

YoursSincerely,

LiMing

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  Dearpresident,I,asaseniorstudentofouruniversity,amwritingtoexpressinthislettermydeepestconcernabouttheimprovementofstudent’s(students’不止一个学生哦)physicalconditionandc...
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