问题标题：
有没有句型以及语法错误这段英语有没有语法以及句型的错误若有错误麻烦改正Hello,everyone.MynameisXXandI’mverygladtoseeyouallhere.I’matypicalLeogirl.Ilikesunflowers,Ilikesunshine,andIlikesun
问题描述：
有没有句型以及语法错误
这段英语有没有语法以及句型的错误
若有错误麻烦改正
Hello,everyone.MynameisXXandI’mverygladtoseeyouallhere.I’matypicalLeogirl.Ilikesunflowers,Ilikesunshine,andIlikesunflower-likesmilethatalwaysturnstowardsthesunandnevergivesupintears.Ilovetosmileandtolaugh.I’malwaysbravetopursuemylove.IdaretoloveandhateandalwaysstickatmydreamevenwhenIsuffermisfortuneandpain.
Ilikeasinger,ZengYike,becausesheisverylikeofusnowadays,includingme,whoalwaysfightforourdreams.
Thisisjustme,anoptimistic,braveanddeterminedLeogirl.Hopeyoucanlikemeandwecanmakefriends.Thanks.
程建中回答：
第一段whenIsuffermisfortuneandpain.
suffer后加from忍受...煎熬
第二段including应是included
第三段Hopeyoucanlikemeandwecanmakefriends.缺主语,应是Ihopeyoucanlikemeandwecanmakefriends.
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