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【各位英语达人们,帮我改改这篇英语作文呗.改出我的·语法错误,我是高二学生,可以追分的.DearRam,ThankyouforyourconcernabouttheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismIslandTheconstructionofHainanInternat】
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各位英语达人们,帮我改改这篇英语作文呗.改出我的·语法错误,我是高二学生,可以追分的.

DearRam,

ThankyouforyourconcernabouttheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismIsland

TheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismwillattractmoretouristseveryear,anditwilldevelopthetourism.ManypeopleinHainanhasnotgotgoodjobs,butthisconstructioncanoffermorejobs.

OurHainanisawonderfulcity,afterthisconstruction,Hainanhasbecamemoreandmorebeautiful.Besides,thetrafficinourcityhasbeenbetternow.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatHainanisrealllylikeabiggarden,andasthematteroffact,inmyopion,Hainanisthemostprettyplaceintheworld.DoyouwanttotakeajourneytoHainan,myfriend?

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  DearRam,ThankyouforyourconcernabouttheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismIslandTheconstructionofHainanInternationalTourismwillattractmore(没有比较的用many要好些)...
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