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看看这篇六年级英语日记有没有错或者意见Todaywasasunnyday.So,Iwenttoplaybadmintonwithmyfriendsafterschool,Itwasverygood.Theend,Iwasthewinner,Iwasveryhappy.Ataboutfiveoclock.Iwentmyhome,anddomyhome
问题描述：
看看这篇六年级英语日记有没有错或者意见
Todaywasasunnyday.So,Iwenttoplaybadmintonwithmyfriendsafterschool,Itwasverygood.Theend,Iwasthewinner,Iwasveryhappy.Ataboutfiveoclock.Iwentmyhome,anddomyhomework.Thatwasagoodday.写的很烂,因为实在没什么好写了.还有那个oclock那个撇不知道怎么打所以就没打了
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Todayisasunnyday.Iwenttoplaybadmintonwithmyfriendsafterschool,Iplayitverywell.Theend,Iwasthewinner,Iwasveryhappy.Ataboutfiveo'clock.Iwenthome,anddidmyhomework.Itwasthebestdayintheweek.
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