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英语作文修改.请尽量在保持愿意的基础上进行修改,Directions:YouhavereadfromthewebsitethatABCCompanyislookingforasecretary.Youthinkyourfriendissuitableforthisvacancy.Writealetterofrecommendationtowhomitm
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英语作文修改.请尽量在保持愿意的基础上进行修改,
Directions:YouhavereadfromthewebsitethatABCCompanyislookingforasecretary.Youthinkyourfriendissuitableforthisvacancy.Writealetterofrecommendationtowhomitmayconcern.Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.Donotsignyournameattheendoftheletter.Use“WangLin”instead.Donotwritetheaddress.
Dearli
Ionthewebsitetoseeyourcompanyintherecruitmentofsecretary,seeyourecruitmentconditionsafterthinkmyfriendisverysuitableforyourrequirements.Hegraduatedfromuniversityofcommerce,incomputerandEnglishlearningisverygood.SheIpositiveprogresshastheveryhighaffinity,ifyouareinterested,pleasemakesuretheinterviewtime,I'llinformhimtobringyourresumetoyourcompanyontimetointerview.Lookingforwardtoyourreply
Yourssincerely,
WangLin
何祥回答：
这一篇太中式,无法修改,要全部重新写过方可.
Towhomitmayconcern或Dearsirsormadam,
MynameisWangLin.Ihavejustseenyourcompany'srecruitmentadvertismentonyourcompany'swebsiteandIthinkoneofmyfriendswhowasgraduatedfromauniversityofcommerce.SheisverygoodwithcomputerandfluentinEnglishandwouldbemostsuitablefortheposition.Sheishardworking,veryreliableandhasgoodsenseofresponsibilty.Iwouldliketoreccommandhertoyourcompany.Ifyouareinterested,pleaseforwardmewithaninterviewtimeandIwillinformherinduecourse.Lookforwardtohearingofyourreplysoon.Bestregards.
YoursSincerely,
WangLin
这样写会比较地道,希望会令你满意.
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