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帮忙修改一下英文加薪信10daysisoverfromthelastdayofmytrialperiod.Won’tyousendmeaperformanceappraisalform?Inviewofthefollowingreasons,Ihopecompanycangivearaiseofmysalary:1.I’mprofessionalontheproducts
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帮忙修改一下英文加薪信

10daysisoverfromthelastdayofmytrialperiod.Won’tyousendmeaperformanceappraisalform?

Inviewofthefollowingreasons,Ihopecompanycangivearaiseofmysalary:

1.I’mprofessionalontheproductsIhandledwithmorethan9yearsexperienceinthisindustry;

2.Toa9yearsmerchandiser.theaverageofbasepayisRMB0000.00andwithsocialbenefitstopay;

3.ThebasepayofmylastjobisRMB0000withdousingfundtopay,Ihopemypresentincomeismorethanthisfigure,atleasttomaintainit;

4.ThemostimportancereasonisthatinthethreemonthsmyordersgowellandImatedwithSalesanddesignerscloselyandinerrably.

如何能够再委婉一些?

苏东海回答:
  跟老外说话不用委婉吧,最好进去跟他们拍桌子,说不定能成
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