帮忙修改一下雅思A类大作文,人口问题的处理方法
Itistruethatworldpopulationisgrowingveryfast,human'sbirthrateisimprovingfromyeartoyear,somecountriessuchasChina,IndiaandJapanarefacingunsustainablepopulationgrowth.thisisaveryseriousproblem,butwealsohavesomewaystohelpus,liketheeducationand.
Themostimportantweaponwehavetofightpopulationgrowthiseducation.Itshouldstartattheearlyage,beforechildrenevengotoschool.TVcartoonsandchildren’sprogramscanbeusedtoeducatethem.Athighschool,studentswillbetaughtabouttheproblemmoredirectly.Atuniversity,scholarshipsshouldbemadeavailabletostudentswhowishtostudyfurtherinthisfield.Itwillhelpthemtoknowthepopulation‘explosion’isaseriousproblemwhichtheyshouldsolveittogether.
Anotherimportantmeansofcontrollingpopulationgrowthistodisadvantagepeoplewhohavemorethanoneortwochildren.Weshouldraisetheawarenessofmenandwomenregardingtheissueslikefamilyplanning.Theyalsoshouldknowthatifthepopulationcontinuetoboosttherewouldbegreatdemandforfood,water,landandresources.Itwillmakemanyshortagesoffood,waterandotherresourcescanleadtomilitaryconflicts.Atlast,wecantellthemthattheywilllivinginthe2000storeybuilding.
Itshouldalsobepossibletomakecontraceptiondevicesfreetothepublicandeasilyobtainable.
Thisproblemisaverydifficultonetosolvebutbutweshouldmakeeveryefforttodoso.Byaddressingoneproblemwewouldbeaddressingtheothersaswell.