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帮忙修改一下雅思A类大作文,人口问题的处理方法Itistruethatworldpopulationisgrowingveryfast,human'sbirthrateisimprovingfromyeartoyear,somecountriessuchasChina,IndiaandJapanarefacingunsustainablepopulation
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帮忙修改一下雅思A类大作文,人口问题的处理方法

Itistruethatworldpopulationisgrowingveryfast,human'sbirthrateisimprovingfromyeartoyear,somecountriessuchasChina,IndiaandJapanarefacingunsustainablepopulationgrowth.thisisaveryseriousproblem,butwealsohavesomewaystohelpus,liketheeducationand.

Themostimportantweaponwehavetofightpopulationgrowthiseducation.Itshouldstartattheearlyage,beforechildrenevengotoschool.TVcartoonsandchildren’sprogramscanbeusedtoeducatethem.Athighschool,studentswillbetaughtabouttheproblemmoredirectly.Atuniversity,scholarshipsshouldbemadeavailabletostudentswhowishtostudyfurtherinthisfield.Itwillhelpthemtoknowthepopulation‘explosion’isaseriousproblemwhichtheyshouldsolveittogether.

Anotherimportantmeansofcontrollingpopulationgrowthistodisadvantagepeoplewhohavemorethanoneortwochildren.Weshouldraisetheawarenessofmenandwomenregardingtheissueslikefamilyplanning.Theyalsoshouldknowthatifthepopulationcontinuetoboosttherewouldbegreatdemandforfood,water,landandresources.Itwillmakemanyshortagesoffood,waterandotherresourcescanleadtomilitaryconflicts.Atlast,wecantellthemthattheywilllivinginthe2000storeybuilding.

Itshouldalsobepossibletomakecontraceptiondevicesfreetothepublicandeasilyobtainable.

Thisproblemisaverydifficultonetosolvebutbutweshouldmakeeveryefforttodoso.Byaddressingoneproblemwewouldbeaddressingtheothersaswell.

黄瑞照回答:
  建议你直接到新东方的批改网提交一下,有外教批改,还能给你范文重写什么的,打的分也比较准   我从那改过,还不错.还有品论、修改意见什么的
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