托福作文第一次写求拍!

Forsuccessfuldevelopmentofacountry,shouldagovernmentfocusits

budgetmoreonveryyoungchildreneducationratherthanonuniversities?

Nowadays,educationmakesabigcontributiontoprogressivechangewithinsociety.Thusthetopicaboutwhichthegovernmentshouldbudgetmoredrawsmanyresidents’attraction.Inmypointofview,it’sbettertousemoremoneyonyoungchildren’seducation.

Firstly,moreinvestmentonyoungchildreneducationisinfavorofpublicinterest.Infact,thenumberofveryyoungpeopleisoverweightheadults’.Asaresult,itenjoysmoreextensivenessandqualifiededucatorsthanuniversities’education.Forinstance,metropolitanslikeBeijingvirtuallyestablishes1500primaryschool,whilecollegesonlyoccupiesalittleproportionandthenumberofschoolisaround100.Obviously,thefundamentaleducationisinmoreneedthanthecollege’seducation.

Additionally,facilitiescostafortuneforyoungchildren’seducation.Forinstance,takingtheirageintoaccount,schoolsmayhiremoreteacherstosupervisethem,whichcanavoidunexpectedaccidentseffectively.Ifastudentischasinganotheroneduringthebreak,teacherscouldstophimdoingthatandavoidapotentialaccidentbetweentwoofthestudents.What’smore,inadditiontopouringmoneyonthefaculty,schoolmayalsousemoneytobuildmorefacilitiesinaccordancewithyoungchildren’sneedsuchasslide,swing.Contrarytosportgameslikebasketballandfootball,thesesimpleequipmentareeasierforpupilstorelaxandrelief.

Undoubtedly,investmentonuniversities’educationisimportantaswell.Salariesofprofessorsandvariousscholarshipsneedmoneytoo.Butcertainwaysareavailabletosolvetheproblem.Forinstance,schoolscanfinancemoremoneybyincreasingthetuition.Furthermore,schoolcanalsoturntothosebrilliantandpromisingalumniforhelp.Asweknow,manygraduatorsfromHarvardmakebigcontributionstotheirschool.BillGatessupportsHarvardtobuildmorelibrariesandlabs.

Inconclusion,takingthenumberofstudentsandtheneedofpublicintoconsideration,governmentshouldusemoremoneyonyoungpupils’educationthanonuniversities.