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求圣人帮我看看这篇托福作文这么写行吗?Shouldgovernmentsspendmoremoneyonimprovingroadsandhighways,orshouldgovernmentsspendmoremoneyonimprovingpublictransportation(buses,trains,subways)?Why?Usespecificreasonsandd
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求圣人帮我看看这篇托福作文这么写行吗?
Shouldgovernmentsspendmoremoneyonimprovingroadsandhighways,orshouldgovernmentsspendmoremoneyonimprovingpublictransportation(buses,trains,subways)?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay
Haveyoueverworriedabouttheautomobileexhaustcancausedyoudisease?Haveyoueverworriedaboutthecongestivetrafficcancausedyoulateforanappointment?Haveyoueverworriedaboutthetrafficsafetycanbecomeworseduetothelargenumbersofautomobiles?Ifyoudonothavesuchexperienceyouwouldneverknowhowimportantthepublictransportationis.Incontrast,improvingthepublictransportationshouldbemorepriority.Sogovernmentsshouldspendmoremoneyonimprovingpublictransportationasfarasmacrolevelisconcerned.
这个段落我感觉前三个会不会显得跑题了似的?
错误颇多~莫骂
这个是第一段.....
胡冰回答：
首先太短了,这个做introduction还可以.感觉上这篇东西没有正文.而且有一点不通.Ifyoudonothavesuchexperienceyouwouldneverknowhowimportantthepublictransportationis.最好改成,ifyouhaveexpe...
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