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【六级作文就一段请各位大侠看看有什么语法上的问题伐?Everyyear,therearealotofgraduatescomingtothecurrentsociety.Someofthemarewillingtostrivefortheirbetterlifebythemselves,butnowmoreandmoregraduatescho】
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六级作文就一段请各位大侠看看有什么语法上的问题伐?

Everyyear,therearealotofgraduatescomingtothecurrentsociety.Someofthemarewillingtostrivefortheirbetterlifebythemselves,butnowmoreandmoregraduateschoosetolivetogetherwiththeirparents.

孙守林回答:
  alotof后接不可数名词.改为many吧~   还有,越来越在英语里表达是MORE,我们老师说不要用MOREANDMORE.   comingtothecurrentsociety.这句话表达的很别扭,用entering吧.
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