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六级作文就一段请各位大侠看看有什么语法上的问题伐?Thereasonforthisstrangephenomenonisobvious.Firstly,boththehighpriceofhousingandthestressofworkarethebiggestfactor.Graduatescan'taffordanapartmentorre
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六级作文就一段请各位大侠看看有什么语法上的问题伐?

Thereasonforthisstrangephenomenonisobvious.Firstly,boththehighpriceofhousingandthestressofworkarethebiggestfactor.Graduatescan'taffordanapartmentorrentitwithsolittlewage,andtheyaretoobusytohaveenoughtimetomakesupper.Ontheotherhand,students,incurrentlife,arelackofsomeambition,comparingtoourparents.last,thesereasonleadthemtolivingwiththeirparents

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  理了一下,你看看可要顺一些.   ItsoundsstrangethatmostgraduatesinChinatendtolivewiththeirparentsaftergraduation.However,behindthephenomenonlieavarietyofreasons.First,graduatescan'taffordtohaveorrentanapartmentforthemtolivein,withsolittleawagecomparedtothehighhousingprice.Second,theyaretoobusytohaveenoughtimetopreparemealsthemselves,andtheyaresufferingfromthegreatstressatwork.Third,theirparentsarealwaysreadytohelpthemandsupplyasenseofcomfortandsafety.
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