请帮忙改一下英语语法错误First,theoldcampusissofullofrichhistory,thisisagoodplacetogo.Theoldcampushasayoungerlonghistory.Italsohasmanyhistoricalsites,peoplecanseeandlearnaboutthem.Forexample,thesearema|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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请帮忙改一下英语语法错误First,theoldcampusissofullofrichhistory,thisisagoodplacetogo.Theoldcampushasayoungerlonghistory.Italsohasmanyhistoricalsites,peoplecanseeandlearnaboutthem.Forexample,thesearema

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请帮忙改一下英语语法错误

First,theoldcampusissofullofrich

history,thisisagoodplacetogo.Theoldcampushasayounger

longhistory.It

alsohasmanyhistoricalsites,peoplecanseeandlearnaboutthem.For

example,thesearemanyoftheoldbuildingshavewitnessedthedevelopmentof

theschool.Peoplecanbetterunderstandthe

schoolandaclearunderstandingofthewholeschoolaswell.Aswell.Asaresult,theoldcampusisa

goodplace.Second,thereasonwhytheold

campusisagoodplacetovisitistheoldcampustoreflecttheschool's

philosophyorvalues.Peoplecan

recognizethembytheoldbuildingsandcampusatmosphere.Forexample,whenpeoplevisit

theoldcampus,theycanseethewholesceneoncampus,liketheconstruction

ofthecampus,celebrities,sothatwecanlookatthestatuethroughoutthe

schoolvalues.Onthe

contrary,wecannotfindtheminthenewcampus.Third,onecanfindalotof

goodmemoriesattheoldcampus.Thisisforthosewhograduated

fromtheiruniversityevenmoreso.Theoldcampusisdefinitelya

goodpreciousmemoriestherewhenvisitingtheoldcampus.At

thatmoment,theywouldfeeliftheycomebacktoafamiliarplace.Theoldcampuswillremindthe

friendshipbetweentheirclassmatesfeelingsbetweenteachersandtheir.Thosememoriesareabsolutein

theirlifethemostvaluableasset.Thefourthreasonisthatthe

oldcampusamorecomfortableenvironment.Undoubtedly,theoldcampushas

stunningscenery,wecanfocusonoursoul.Face

charmingenvironment,peoplecanrelaxyourbodyandmind.Sotheoldcampusisdefinitely

agoodplace.Finally,

notleast,theoldcampushasmanyhistoricalsites.Forexample,inourcampus,

therearemanyhistoricalbuildings.ConfucianMemorialisoneof

them.Whenpeoplevisittheold

campus,theycanvisitthememorial,tounderstandtheessenceoftheculture

andConfucianism.People

canfeeltheschoolcannotbefoundinanewculture.There

isanotherhistoricalattractionsintheoldcampus,I

郝彦军回答：

　　First,theoldcampusisagoodplacetogobecauseitisrichinhistory.Ithasmanyhistoricalsiteswhichpeoplecanseeandlearnabout.Forexample,manyoldbuildingshavewitnessedtheupsanddownsoftheschool.Havingastrollfromtheclassromms,dormitorytothefamehall,peoplemusthavebeenamazedatsolargeanumberofscientists,musicians,andexpertshere.Asaresult,theoldcampusisagoodplace. 　　Second,thereasonwhytheoldcampusisagoodplacetovisitisthatitreflectstheschool'sphilosophyandvalues.Peoplecanrecognizethembytheoldbuildingsandcampusatmosphere.Forexample,peoplecanseethewholesceneoncampus,liketheconstruction 　　ofthecampus,celebritieswhentheycomehere.Sowecanlookatthestatuethroughoutthe 　　schoolvalues,which,inthecontrary,wecannotfindtheminthenewcampus. 　　Third,onecanfindalotofgoodmemoriesattheoldcampus.Thisisforthosewhograduated 　　fromtheiruniversitiesevenmoreso.Theoldcampusisdefinitelyagoodpreciousmemoriestherewhenvisitingtheoldcampus.Atthatmoment,theywouldfeelliketheyhadcomebacktoafamiliarplace.Theoldcampuswillremindthefriendshipbetweentheirclassmates,feelingsbetweenteachersandstudents.Thosememoriesareabsolutelythemostvaluableassetsintheirlives. 　　Thefourthreasonisthattheoldcampusisamorecomfortableenvironment.Undoubtedly,theoldcampushasstunningscenerythatwecanfocusonoursoul.Facedwithsuchacharmingenvironment,peoplecanrelaxyourbodyandmind.Sotheoldcampusisdefinitely 　　agoodplace. 　　Lastbutnotleast,theoldcampushasmanyhistoricalsites.Forexample,inourcampus, 　　therearemanyhistoricalbuildingsandConfucianMemorialisoneofthem.Whenpeoplevisittheoldcampus,theycanvisitthememorialinoedertounderstandtheessenceoftheculture 　　andConfucianism.Peoplecanhaveafeelingthatcannotbefoundinanewculture.There 　　aremanyotherhistoricalattractionshere,whichIwon'tmentiononebyone. 　　Inshort,theoldcampusisworthyourvisit!

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